Thursday, 20 May 2010

GLINT OF SOLACE.

Pacing the floor;

Calmly distracted, the sun stains the empty white walls
with shadows of leaves and twigs;
Silhouettes, patterns of grey caught, suspended in forms,
Plants stand lowly basking on top of pine draws in digs
I'm made to sit; solace beckons behind a closed door.

No interruptions encountered in this sun-trap glaze,
Nothing disturbs the rays and their colours flowing free,
Evening stalks like clockwork, as it has for countless days,
The stream glistens, proudly, through radiant glass pristine,

Strokes like strobes gently honour yellow, orange shades,
While the breeze cries in soft merriment as magic faintly speaks,
That evening's come and dusk throws breath on night not far away,
Laments and odes of this day, expound in worlds before she sleeps.


Transfixed in the zone; picturesque portal of passive moods,
Ornaments and furry treasures loiter on the sill,
The hum of the immersion in the next door cleaning room,
Takes on the backdrop to my quiet in this sunny space so still,
Stopped pacing the floor, now slumped into lofty looks at the high
crescent moon,
And for a short pause taken undeterred, solace had been fulfilled.

5 comments:

  1. Excellent Violet Flame !!
    Really a beautiful poem, you paint the images so vividly,it feels as if the reader is there with you ...

    xx

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  2. Really well written poem VF

    Moonshineday

    xx

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  3. really lovely poem

    dewdrop

    x

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  4. Thankyou Jupiterchildren for your uplifting and lovely comment!

    Thankyou Moonshineday for your nice comment!

    Thankyou Dewdrop, glad you like it!

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  5. Stunning Poem

    Amy

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