Sunday, 23 May 2010

ABANDONED TO THE CLOSET!

Stifling an idea by dissecting its worth,
Enthusiasm is dampened after
forwarding a creative burst,
I believe ideas good or not so good
Have a right to be heard,
And received in a tone that ones
creative bubble's not being burst,
Also to be left, regardless of outcome,
still in an optimistic thirst.

Being lectured and overridden on an idea
posed,
That it will be received by another in a
Negative show,
Or confronted by a contemptuous retort,
Or refused outright without any thought,
That's another's choice and perogative;
not for us to say,
Constructive criticism posed can be taken
in a gracious way,
But a self fulfilling prophecy's no proof in
foresight and clarity for answers assumed
on how someone else will be, or play.

An idea inspired had been received,
In a negative fashion without feedback
to feed,
The spirit; creative juices, the manna one
needs to eat,
Except for someone's feelings to get over
and say their piece,
But I read and see it as a pessimistic streak,
a blockage which is unsurprisingly plugged in
on constant repeat!

2 comments:

  1. Venting a bit on this one ? ..lol

    Moonshineday x

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  2. Thanks Moonshineday, for your comment!

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