Thursday 14 October 2010

STANCE OF ECHO.

I am but an echo in the crowd,
Who would hear or come to
help me if my spirit cried aloud?
Many shades of vibrant faces
present; walking proud,
I look and stand among them
But not of them in a shroud,
Protecting, preserving a disposition
Comes with a lonely cloud.

2 comments:

  1. Excellent - this one - really brilliant ... totally conjures up the feeling you are trying to convey ...

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  2. Thankyou Jupiterchildren for your very positive comment!

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