Who would hear or come to
help me if my spirit cried aloud?
Many shades of vibrant faces
present; walking proud,
I look and stand among them
But not of them in a shroud,
Protecting, preserving a disposition
Comes with a lonely cloud.
Collection of thoughts from Mercury, to share.
Excellent - this one - really brilliant ... totally conjures up the feeling you are trying to convey ...
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Thankyou Jupiterchildren for your very positive comment!
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